Saturday, June 23, 2007

Haiku Results, Part 2


Parenthetical
comments in blue make us spew
coffee at our screens

--Marissa Doyle


Gentle fall of words
Shredded on a blog that proves
those who can't, critique.

--phoenix


Yes, your work gets mocked.
This will help you to improve.
Though you still won't sell.

--EE


One evil edit
Deserves another, they say.
I’m not buying it.

--ME


Evil's nature is
The complete lack of goodness.
Yup. This is the place.

--Gutterball


If he were really
evil, EE would pick my
continuations.

--blogless_troll


You like being the
butt of sarcastic lampoons?
Submit to Evil.

--Dick Margulis


Are his side whiskers
real or just a pair of dead
voles glued to his face?

--Marissa Doyle


If you don't submit
Queries and openings soon
This blog may snark off.

EE

1 comment:

The Green Cat said...

Love the one about the sideburns!