Sunday, August 02, 2009

PoetrySub 6

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens

a dame with
great tits

a line of coke

and Novel Deviations
#s 1-3

3 comments:

Sarah Laurenson said...

Hah!

More please. I only just got started here.

_*Rachel*_ said...

Reminds me of a professor I heard. "People come here for leaders! People at Harvard wish they could wear this college's T-shirt! We have a great reputation! And we don't plagiarize!"

Nice adaptation!

fairyhedgehog said...

I liked the "glazed with rain water" and the contrast between that and the plug for EE's books.